vox nihili

My Dear Americans, There is something I wish to direct your attentions to, and that something is the existence of British English. Although essentially the same as American English in ...

Other than a few typos, such as 'grey' which should be 'gray' and 'no where' which should be 'nowhere', I couldn't find anything to really comment on. I like the ...

I haven't submitted any poetry lately, but I figured I would submit this. I wrote it as something for an oral presentation. Tell me what you think about it. __________ ...

First off, I love the topic! The whole idea about Harry Potter being a child's story, versus the resounding evidence many readers find to the contrary. (well, I mean, it's ...

What wonderfully articulated piece! I found only a couple of typos. red=spelling or change needs to be made blue=my comment Okay, so summer requirements for 11th grade Advanced Placement English ...

Ding Dong At this Russell rose back up and headed towards the door. Anyone who knew Russell knew that he did not give visitors a second chance to contact him ...

A/N: This is just a quick one shot I wrote for Avatar, with the prompt "Introduction." Please give concrits :) They are greatly appreciated. A Proper Introduction Zuko was in ...

[quote="stephaniez08"] Chapter 1 – The End to Summer, The Start to a New Friendship There was countless mud puddles scattered amongst the grassy terrain. There *were* his favourite chips were ...

So far, this is a very interesting piece. It's pretty original, the lion cross-breeds and such. I enjoyed the suspense, but there are things that can be worked on: 1) ...

Foreign Bloom Precious, pliant seed, you , washed on this new land by jealous current, are pitiable. ' you' is not really needed in this sentence; it's already apparent you ...

This is an absolutely haunting piece. I read the entire thing in a few minutes, completely transfixed. The detail is stunning, and the tone....I don't know the word for it. ...

I love the concept. It reminds me of a poem by Robert Louis Stevenson. Yours is a bit different from his, though, a bit less well, childish. I really like ...

This is a really heart-touching pretense. Wow. It's got great potential. A few adjustments will go a long way to making this piece really shine. One: format. If you look ...

A statue stands high as can be, outshining stars, and comets as far as eye can see. On a plinth in a square, quite and stoic Quiet not 'quite' No ...

Very good! This is truly an engrossing piece. The de scription of trying to get his attention through the rush at lockers is so realistic. I must say this is ...